how many tears will fall,
for the pain to wash away?
how many wounds will it take,
before i fall and break?
you said there's hope,
that i must wait.
you said to look,
on the brighter side.
i took your words,
and held them tight.
as i took my life,
i saw the light.
it shone with such brightness,
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Personal propensity towards suicide, experiences and opinions: Your God does not make me want to reconsider my thoughts about suicide · Suicide Was A Good Choice 'Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening', poem by Robert Frost
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one life would never see.
things are looking up,
i hope you are too.
find me behind the clouds,
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Suicide Poem, This Is My Goodbye, Death Poems, I did this for an english speech about depression and suicide.
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and i'll let it rain.
to show that i miss you,
that i'm sorry for the pain.
time will bring us closer,
everytime the sun sets.
we'll share the light that shines,
till the end we'll have forever.
That's really good!!!! :)
i like it, it's very good =)
if you don't mind a little criticism though, there are a few places that i think could use some work-
"you said there's hope,
that i must wait.
you said to look,
on the brighter side."
the rhythm is kind of broken there i think, but it still doesn't sound bad.
maybe the last line could be changed too, but thats just my opinion, and there are probably many people that would disagree with me.
overall though i would definitely give it an A. good job =)
wow thats awesome but really sad i love it!!!! but u almost made me cry u are going 2b the next Shakespeare!!!!!!!!!!!
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Opinions for my poem about Suicide?