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thoughts of you and what once was
hatred for the way you make me feel
leaving me lifeless here bleeding from my chest,
with a feeling of emptiness in my heart,
tha darkness has spread from my heart,
it has destroyed me and my perception,
the world is not a bright place anymore,
the hate was to strong to fight.
i cant belive you left me like this,
with a feeling of emptiness in my heart
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pain and misery are all i feel ,
the thoughts of madness in my head,
and the hatred for you
will never......................................
replace the feeling of emptiness in my heart
i know the i's are not apital i'm just talking about the words. started typing and never looked up and was just wondering if it was any good..
um no....
that totally blows
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Where are the strong men at.
hm... Well it's alright. You really expressed your feelings and I like that. But it isn't the best quality or rythm. You really need rythm in this poem. And you really want to make the reader feel your pain. And I did. That's good. But rythm, rythm, rythm. And originilatiy. It wasn't too original. But overall, I like it because poetry is about expressing yourself and you definitely did that. Good job. I write a lot of poetry. I'm always writing poems. Keep writing poetry, because it really helps. :)
I dig it,I write poetry in my spare time also.keep it up.
It sounds like you are in pain from someone betraying you. This is a good poem. It would make a good song.
I love all of it except the last verse, the last verse seems kinda forced to me, while the rest seems honest.
ADDED: Who said he was talking about a girl? Maybe he's talking about a dog, a parent, a friend, or a guy???
Expressing yourself doesn't make you desperate, it makes you real.
Its good, I like it, even though its a debbie downer
Sounds like ****. Go be happy somewhere. Frolic in a field of daisies or something, but for god's sake get out of the house and be happy.
Let it go man, the hatred its destuctive-lol.
Yea its sounds good.
I like it...a lot actually...have you done any other pieces? If so do you mind emailing them to me? This is really good, so I'm curious..
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