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Ok i'm in a weird mood today, does this sound good?
Published by: cfz 2010-03-16
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    rage fills my soul as i lay here
    thoughts of you and what once was
    hatred for the way you make me feel
    leaving me lifeless here bleeding from my chest,
    with a feeling of emptiness in my heart,

    tha darkness has spread from my heart,
    it has destroyed me and my perception,
    the world is not a bright place anymore,
    the hate was to strong to fight.
    i cant belive you left me like this,
    with a feeling of emptiness in my heart

    love is no longer a word to me,
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    pain and misery are all i feel ,
    the thoughts of madness in my head,
    and the hatred for you
    will never......................................
    replace the feeling of emptiness in my heart


    i know the i's are not apital i'm just talking about the words. started typing and never looked up and was just wondering if it was any good..


  • um no....


  • that totally blows


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    Where are the strong men at.


  • hm... Well it's alright. You really expressed your feelings and I like that. But it isn't the best quality or rythm. You really need rythm in this poem. And you really want to make the reader feel your pain. And I did. That's good. But rythm, rythm, rythm. And originilatiy. It wasn't too original. But overall, I like it because poetry is about expressing yourself and you definitely did that. Good job. I write a lot of poetry. I'm always writing poems. Keep writing poetry, because it really helps. :)


  • I dig it,I write poetry in my spare time also.keep it up.


  • It sounds like you are in pain from someone betraying you. This is a good poem. It would make a good song.


  • I love all of it except the last verse, the last verse seems kinda forced to me, while the rest seems honest.

    ADDED: Who said he was talking about a girl? Maybe he's talking about a dog, a parent, a friend, or a guy???

    Expressing yourself doesn't make you desperate, it makes you real.


  • Its good, I like it, even though its a debbie downer


  • Sounds like ****. Go be happy somewhere. Frolic in a field of daisies or something, but for god's sake get out of the house and be happy.


  • Let it go man, the hatred its destuctive-lol.
    Yea its sounds good.


  • I like it...a lot actually...have you done any other pieces? If so do you mind emailing them to me? This is really good, so I'm curious..

    ceyannatalktalktalk@yahoo.com





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