do you remember
that freezing day in december
it was christmas eve
you confessed your love for me
we were perfect together
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37 posts - 9 authors - Last post: May 3, 2003I felt another message, that in times of great need, the light will help .. Now the poems I wrote recently are for a story I am writing,
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drift apart?
we shouldn't have ever
that's what i thought
all that s**t?
i shouldn't have bought
"I Carry Your Heart With Me," A Discussion of the Poem by E. E. ::
Feb 18, 2006 During his lifetime Cummings wrote over 900 poems, two novels, four plays, His style forces a certain rhythm into the poem when read aloud. Maids Who Need Meters! The Images of My Thoughts · Haiku For U
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i watched the stars
all lost in space
they can't breathe
the could be gone without a trace
nobody would notice
we should be closer than that
closer than we and the stars
that seem to reside farther than mars
but they are beautiful like you
rips in space we can see through
places people would never travel to
you and me are like them, too
we won't travel
we have too much to loose
and not enough to gain
it's always the same
as out goes the flame
keeping me intact
you and me is just a stupid act
so stupid people will just throw us away
maybe then i can touch those stars
those rips in space
maybe then,
maybe then,
maybe then i can be gone with no trace.
You sound sad. A love lost can hurt. You express it well.
I LOVE IT it's brilliant. i love how you emphasized about stars and compared it to your love
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