ok i had to re-write the poem a dream defferd by langston hughes in to a different tone, heres Langston's:
a dream deferred
From Whose House Does the Secret Sound of a Jade Flute Fly?::
Jan 20, 2007 From Whose House Does the Secret Sound of a Jade Flute Fly? this poem calls to mind all of the sweet sounds that may elevate the human
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What is a poem made of?::
Imagery is important in a poem because it is language that allows us to be sound: how does the word sound? Does the sound contribute to the meaning,
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what happens to a dream deferred?
rhyme poem::
Rhyme Do the poems rhyme Rhyme can carry a poem along. Does the rhyme make the poem sing Does a lack of rhyme make the poem sound more like conversation
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does it dry up
like a raisin in the sun?
or fester like a sore--
and then run?
does it stink like rotten meat?
or crust and sugar over--
like a syrupy sweet?
HOW TO EXPLICATE A POEM (with thanks to Betsy Draine of the ::
Movement: How does the poem develop? Are the images and ideas developed Other "sound effects": alliteration, assonance, consonance repetition<= /strong>
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maybe it just sags
like a heavy load.
or does it explode?
and heres mine:
a dream confirmed
what happens to a dream confirmed?
does it come true like a prophecy?
or snap like a twig--
and then fade away?
does it pull and tug like a small child?
or nag and nag--
like a parent?
maybe it just blooms
like a spring blossom.
or does it shrivel and die?
i think you are really good and u turned the poem better in a different way
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How does this poem sound?